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okay wow, so what you've done with my voice in this is super cool. you have this talent for being able to mold whatever instrument you're using it on a magnified level to really get your desired effects and I think that, to me, is what makes your pieces so special all of the time. (@LunacyEcho, I wasn't making those sounds or vowel noises haha, johnfn cut my singing to make it sound like that ^_~)
my favourite part about this piece is actually probably the piano composition, especially twinned with the sounds of the playground voices. there's a real beauty about this song that I've not really heard from you in the past. I think the decay on the piano ends a little abruptly, perhaps that's an error with the render, however it would have sounded more complete with a subtle fade-out. I think that's probably what you intended anyway though!
yeahhh, it's a shame steamy and zippy couldn't enter this round, there's no doubts that it would have been a boss battle round to say the least! congratulations on getting through by default nonetheless. with a piece like this, no person can say that you don't at least deserve your place in the next round! ^ ^
I can't wait to hear more of your work!! well done sir~