I think this piece has a lot of potential! There are some very interesting parts of this piece and I adore the sound of that patterned synth. For me though, I feel like the guitar stands out too much in this piece. It's quite a repetitive rhythm which, if I were to mix it, I'd mix it in to sit with the rest of the orchestration rather than standing out so much until the 1 minute mark!
That part at 1 feels a little bare and I'd have liked to hear more of a build up, however the time signature is very interesting. The cross-over at 1:43 could use a little work as I feel it's more abrupt. I think the ending would benefit from perhaps a reversed cymbal or something else and a snappy end without the delay trailing off.
I still very much enjoyed listening to this, particularly the orchestral parts in the background have a lot of potential. The title though xD oh gosh. Who knows what may happen in this competition? Don't hold up the red flag just yet. All the best and please keep making music!